31 January 2017

Storytelling & Commission: Script


Here is the script I wrote for our current project. I feel that it properly lays out the direction of each shot, and means that if different people were making storyboards for this, they would come out with very similar results. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated!

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  1. Hey Joe - really like the new dialogue - exactly right! :) Just a thought - 'melting room' sounds bit cartoony; how about 'Recycling Room?' instead?

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    1. Hi Phil - I was thinking of changing it from "Melting Room" to something else, just wasn't sure what to change it to!! Thank you for the idea!

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